He & She: An Eternal Story (5)

Her Love, His Betrayal

She looked at the castle in the distance. A hopeless romantic as she was, someday, she thought, I will have a prince charming too and I will feel like a real princess when he will take me there.

He looked at her from a distance, completely smitten by her as her eyes twinkled as she looked at the castle. He wished to take her hand and lead her there.

She turned towards him and smiled, a resigned smile. Her smile told him she still loved him but her expression said she did not trust him enough to take her there. As she made her way towards the castle, all alone, the realization hit him hard and deep. Their eternal love had been marred by his subtle betrayal, it was too late for him.



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Vanya Rajwar

That "not so social" author. An Alpha by sight but a lone wolf by right. Eternally and Devastatingly romantic. Not 'sugary' but dark and tormented. A furore of passion and the despair of an idealism not realised. An Ambivert; my calm demeanour hides the raging storm of emotions inside. A Freelance Writer; expressing emotions through words.

15 thoughts on “He & She: An Eternal Story (5)”

      1. Yes it is! Not the first time I am hearing this. A lot of people say that but I guess that’s the beauty of this shot!! It just seems too far away from the chaos of Disney! Haha!

  1. I really enjoyed reading this and the plot twist at the end! Trust is such a fundamental aspect in any relationship and I’m glad that you addressed that. I also love the image of the castle, it really works well with the poem 😊🌸

    1. Glad you did! Very true! A relationship cannot thrive without trust and trust once lost is hard to recover.
      Ah! Thanks. Yes, it does and being my own muse, I try to find pictures of mine that inspire me to write each time. Haha! I am glad you liked it!

      1. I do get inspired, I don’t know about others though. Haha!
        I consider myself a dark and tormented romantic. I just pour out thoughts that enter my head, sometimes everyday, sometimes in months. They are very Erratic.
        I am glad you are liking them!! πŸ™‚ ❀

      2. On behalf of other people, I do find your work very inspiring 😊🌸
        I like that about you, it makes your work have mystery and it tells a beautiful story. Raw thoughts are sometimes the most wonderful ones! Sadly for me these occur in the shower or in my sleep, when I can’t take note of it πŸ™ˆπŸ˜‚ I hope that you have a lovely weekend πŸ’—

      3. Thank you so much!! Means a lot.
        Well I don’t get them while I sleep but sometimes they strike me just as I am about to fall into a slumber and then there is this haphazard search for a diary and pen to write it down! haha!
        You too!! ❀ ❀

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